Post by Sir Nichtmar on Mar 6, 2008 10:04:27 GMT -5
I felt I needed to iron out my back story, mostly for myself, but I hope you enjoy.
Nichtmar
The surf washed over the beach with a calming roar, the seagulls sung their song, and the sound of small feet pattered with the native boy taunting a crab with a stick and the wind wrapped itself around it all. Further along the shore his father and other men were spear fishing. There was little sound that came from the men, the occasional sound of the spear cutting through the water and maybe the pat on the back from a good catch. These were the only sounds that could be heard on the peaceful beach of Torranmar.
The sound of wood bowing and creaking cried out from the sea. The boy’s eyes snapped to it, seeking the origin of the sound. It came from around the bend. He walked closer, the sound grew, he began to run and he knew he would see it soon. He turned the bend, no longer in site of his father. His eyes rushed with a site he’d never seen. A Viking ship rested about fifty yards from shore, small boats were beaching along the coast, full of armed men.
“Boy!” A man was walking towards the boy.
“Boy! What land is this?” Closer the man came.
The boy was too freighted to move or speak.
“Boy, I’m talking to…”
The man noticed he was no human boy. His eyes focused on the pointed ears, followed along the cheek to the chin and then saw the small fangs coming out from the boy’s lower lip.
He whispers to himself, “What has the Queen of Hel released?”
The man towered over the boy and with a firm strike from his bracer he sent the boy to the ground.
The boy was left to his blackness.
The boy’s vision fluttered as he felt his way through the forest. He heard women screaming, men roaring, children crying, metal against wood and flesh. In the distance he heard the voices of his father and Lyrimar, the Chieftain of their tribe. They spoke the ogre tongue that not many would understand.
“Lyri, take them to the Ran tribe, they will have better protection,” yelled the boy’s father.
“Come, Cad!”
“No I must find Nicht!
Lryimar led what was left of the elders, women and children away. The Mar tribe are fisherman, thin leather and cloth did little to protect them. Although the ogres were larger and stronger, they were not trained and their wooden clubs were no match for Viking steel.
Cadmar stood wearing a torn leather vest and leather skirt. He was covered in ogre and human blood and a gash on his arm was bleeding out. He was about to head back to the fight, but Nichtmar reached out and cried for his father.
“Father!”
Cadmar turned to see his son.
“Nicht!”
He ran to his son kneeling and embracing him. He took him by his shoulders, looking him over.
“Are you ok, boy?”
Nichtmar nodded.
“Where’s mother?”
Cadmar bowed his head for a moment then looked back up to Nichtmar.
“She’s gone.”
Nichtmar began to cry.
“NO!” He held the boy’s shoulders firm.
“Survive now, mourn later! Get up!”
As the boy raised his head, an axe blade drove into the shoulder of his father. His father’s blood sprayed over him, he could taste it. His father fell over revealing the long haired Viking. He laughed with his men.
“Still alive little one?”
Nichtmar leaped up and drove his fangs into the neck of the Viking. The man let out a roar and tossed the boy to the ground. He raised his axe to kill the boy, but before it fell a bamboo spear whistled through the air and found its mark in the man’s arm. He let out another roar. The Ran tribe had come. The Ran fighters were organized. They wore leather armor and were trained. They drove them back. The Vikings retreated to their ship, but the damage had been done.
Years would pass till Nichtmar became a young man. He gave up his tribe’s tradition of fishing and he spent his time in the forest learning how to fight with the Ran. Spear and club had become his tools and the many battles with the Tor would be his lessons. The Tor are berserker ogres, painted red, they hide in the volcanic mountains. During Nichtmar’s years of training a man called Dhugal would visit the island and share knowledge of the ways of man. Nichtmar would learn some of man’s words to prepare him for when he left. Keeran, chieftain of the Ran, watched over Nichtmar as he grew. The two of them stood at the beach where it all began. It was a clear day.
“You don’t have to leave, Nichtmar.”
“But I do…I feel as if I was always meant to leave.”
“I understand.”
Keeran handed him the ore and Nichtmar began to walk the canoe into the water. He turns back.
“Thanks for everything.”
Nichtmar got in the boat and rode out to sea.
to be continued
Nichtmar
The surf washed over the beach with a calming roar, the seagulls sung their song, and the sound of small feet pattered with the native boy taunting a crab with a stick and the wind wrapped itself around it all. Further along the shore his father and other men were spear fishing. There was little sound that came from the men, the occasional sound of the spear cutting through the water and maybe the pat on the back from a good catch. These were the only sounds that could be heard on the peaceful beach of Torranmar.
The sound of wood bowing and creaking cried out from the sea. The boy’s eyes snapped to it, seeking the origin of the sound. It came from around the bend. He walked closer, the sound grew, he began to run and he knew he would see it soon. He turned the bend, no longer in site of his father. His eyes rushed with a site he’d never seen. A Viking ship rested about fifty yards from shore, small boats were beaching along the coast, full of armed men.
“Boy!” A man was walking towards the boy.
“Boy! What land is this?” Closer the man came.
The boy was too freighted to move or speak.
“Boy, I’m talking to…”
The man noticed he was no human boy. His eyes focused on the pointed ears, followed along the cheek to the chin and then saw the small fangs coming out from the boy’s lower lip.
He whispers to himself, “What has the Queen of Hel released?”
The man towered over the boy and with a firm strike from his bracer he sent the boy to the ground.
The boy was left to his blackness.
The boy’s vision fluttered as he felt his way through the forest. He heard women screaming, men roaring, children crying, metal against wood and flesh. In the distance he heard the voices of his father and Lyrimar, the Chieftain of their tribe. They spoke the ogre tongue that not many would understand.
“Lyri, take them to the Ran tribe, they will have better protection,” yelled the boy’s father.
“Come, Cad!”
“No I must find Nicht!
Lryimar led what was left of the elders, women and children away. The Mar tribe are fisherman, thin leather and cloth did little to protect them. Although the ogres were larger and stronger, they were not trained and their wooden clubs were no match for Viking steel.
Cadmar stood wearing a torn leather vest and leather skirt. He was covered in ogre and human blood and a gash on his arm was bleeding out. He was about to head back to the fight, but Nichtmar reached out and cried for his father.
“Father!”
Cadmar turned to see his son.
“Nicht!”
He ran to his son kneeling and embracing him. He took him by his shoulders, looking him over.
“Are you ok, boy?”
Nichtmar nodded.
“Where’s mother?”
Cadmar bowed his head for a moment then looked back up to Nichtmar.
“She’s gone.”
Nichtmar began to cry.
“NO!” He held the boy’s shoulders firm.
“Survive now, mourn later! Get up!”
As the boy raised his head, an axe blade drove into the shoulder of his father. His father’s blood sprayed over him, he could taste it. His father fell over revealing the long haired Viking. He laughed with his men.
“Still alive little one?”
Nichtmar leaped up and drove his fangs into the neck of the Viking. The man let out a roar and tossed the boy to the ground. He raised his axe to kill the boy, but before it fell a bamboo spear whistled through the air and found its mark in the man’s arm. He let out another roar. The Ran tribe had come. The Ran fighters were organized. They wore leather armor and were trained. They drove them back. The Vikings retreated to their ship, but the damage had been done.
Years would pass till Nichtmar became a young man. He gave up his tribe’s tradition of fishing and he spent his time in the forest learning how to fight with the Ran. Spear and club had become his tools and the many battles with the Tor would be his lessons. The Tor are berserker ogres, painted red, they hide in the volcanic mountains. During Nichtmar’s years of training a man called Dhugal would visit the island and share knowledge of the ways of man. Nichtmar would learn some of man’s words to prepare him for when he left. Keeran, chieftain of the Ran, watched over Nichtmar as he grew. The two of them stood at the beach where it all began. It was a clear day.
“You don’t have to leave, Nichtmar.”
“But I do…I feel as if I was always meant to leave.”
“I understand.”
Keeran handed him the ore and Nichtmar began to walk the canoe into the water. He turns back.
“Thanks for everything.”
Nichtmar got in the boat and rode out to sea.
to be continued