Post by Danweirn Gor on Apr 18, 2007 13:57:20 GMT -5
With the stars shining brightly in the night sky and almost a full moon it was not to dark out for being midnight. Not that it really mattered I had always had fairly good night vision. I was on my way home from my weekly visit to town to make my deliveries of furniture that had been completed and to get any new orders. There was only one delivery today and the person could have waited until next week to get piece, but I also got a few new orders so it was not a complete waste. Not to mention that i got to see Samia which is why I was so late getting back home. I was hard to leave her when i only got to see her once a week at most. It would have been easier if i did not want to marry her one day. Samia was the daughter of one of the poorer farmers of the land. He was barley able to support his family. He believed in hard work though which was why he probably why he liked me so much and wanted me to marry his daughter. I lived with my mother and father along with my two nephews of my dead older sister. My sister was killed by a disease almost 4 years ago. The boys were luckily old enough to manage the small farm that supplied us with most of our food. My mother did what most mothers did care for their children even if i did more caring for her than she did for me. My father did what he did best which was at best nothing. He had a good hand at crafting the wood but he was into his drink and dreamweed so much that he only worked one day out of every six. I did the rest of the woodworking and tried to help out wherever i could. I was going to take the shortcut through the sparse woods so i could get home a little faster. As i was nearing the area where i should be able to see the candle in the window that my mother usually leaves there i did not see anything. She probably forgot it she was getting older and could not remember everything that she once could. As i exited the forest i approached the house about 100 yards away. As I got closer I noticed that the door was ajar. Something did not seem right. My father sometimes left the door ajar but not in the middle of the night he usually passed out hours before now. As i entered the house i looked for a lamp to light so i could get up to my room. After i found a lamp and lit it i made my way to the den where i came upon 4 dead bodies. It was my mother, father and my two nephews. There was a huge puddle of blood that spanned almost the entire room. As i recovered from my shock i noticed that i was not alone in the room Their was a tall lanky man wearing a dark green tunic with a pair of dark brown almost appearing black britches. He wore a short sword and a dagger strapped to his belt. I knew that if he attacked me my little measly dagger would not be enough. Then he drew his weapons. As he drew them he started talking about how my mother pleaded with him to spare me and how my father only wanted to save his own life and that my nephews squealed like little girls. I was to stunned to respond so instead i dived into the back room and blocked the door. I figured i had a minute or two before he broke the door down to get my self ready for the attack. I searched the chests in the room for my dads old weapons. It was not much only three throwing knives and a quarterstaff. i was getting the knives ready to throw when the door just burst open. The man was standing there with a demonic grin on his face. As he stepped forward i got off two of the knives in his direction before i grabbed the staff. One knife went high and wide to fly into the room behind him the other narrowly missed his are but getting his tunic pinning his dagger arm to the wall. It would only hold for a second or two before he got free but that was all i needed. He brought his sword in for a low swing. I parried and was able to thrust into his chest and brought the other end around to smash into his knee then followed with a jab with my left to his chin knocking him up against the wall. By this time his arm was free and i was on the defensive. I parried the the high swing of the sword but got a long shallow cut along my side from the dagger. I tried to connect with a series of hits that he knocked away and in return he brought his knee up into my stomach. I back-stepped a little to give me some room. he came in with the dagger first this time with the sword following behind in a thrust. i blocked th dagger but got a deep gash from the sword as he altered his attack to a swing when i dodged and accidental knocked over the lantern catching the straw of the floor on fire. I knew that if i was going to finish this it had to be quick. I ducked behind him and entered into the den. Over the next few encounters and two cuts later i notice a certain chain of attack that left his right side open. As he the dagger in for a thrust i knocker it out wide and then knocked the sword in the same direction and ducked to the right and smashed the end of the staff into the back of his knee bringing him to the ground and brought my dagger out and thrust into his temple. As he lay dying and unconscious on the floor and the adrenaline started wearing off everything that had happened caught up with me. I was alone and most of the house was on fire with no hope of saving it. I quickly grabbed the mans weapons and dragged the rest of my family's bodies out side before the fire could claim them. I quickly ran back in through all the smoke and located food for 2 days and ran back out. After i buried the rest of my family i thought that i could not stay here. The memories were to much. I had to leave and go far away form here. I set of to find a better life in a different land and to hopefully forget this day of sorrow and live a normal life.
sry for the length and the bad grammar but i thought it would be better longer rather than shorter.
This is the first time i wrote anything like this tell me how it was and what changes i could have made to make it better
sry for the length and the bad grammar but i thought it would be better longer rather than shorter.
This is the first time i wrote anything like this tell me how it was and what changes i could have made to make it better