Post by Dorian Prior on Oct 19, 2012 18:49:41 GMT -5
Fixed this for you:
My story is not for the faint of heart. Once I was a noble knight in high respect for slaying evildoers and demons. But one fateful day the unspeakable happened: the evil that plagued the lands found the dread lands and began killing people. My war band and I left to slay this evil.... but we failed and became as twisted he. His name is Zloy Chelovek, which in our native language is “evil man”, which he claimed he was. After the corruption he bound our souls in a sphere that let out horrific screams. But worse of all, he used us to slay the kingdom: all those who loved and praised us were struck down without a second thought. Men, women and children; it made no matter. All were killed. None were spared. We were the true knights of dread now.
Chelovek controlled us for 3 centuries afterwards, killing whole nations that stood in his way. Eventually we developed a deadly sickness that could kill a man at a single touch. We spread it everywhere we could.
It was in a battle against a group that called themselves the Remnants of God that the curse that he controlled us with broke. We were finally free again. We then found out what all we had done ever since that fateful day..
Many years have passed and my war band is still looking for Zloy Chelovek. We have been chasing him all across the world. Our goal is to reclaim our lost souls so we can finally have our final death and face the judgment that we deserve. We have a battle cry for those who stand with us against the man: “Nikto Ny Vyshil!” which we shout for courage against the dammed.
(In all seriousness though, please consider writing your posts in Microsoft Word first before uploading them. You will be understood MUCH better.)
My story is not for the faint of heart. Once I was a noble knight in high respect for slaying evildoers and demons. But one fateful day the unspeakable happened: the evil that plagued the lands found the dread lands and began killing people. My war band and I left to slay this evil.... but we failed and became as twisted he. His name is Zloy Chelovek, which in our native language is “evil man”, which he claimed he was. After the corruption he bound our souls in a sphere that let out horrific screams. But worse of all, he used us to slay the kingdom: all those who loved and praised us were struck down without a second thought. Men, women and children; it made no matter. All were killed. None were spared. We were the true knights of dread now.
Chelovek controlled us for 3 centuries afterwards, killing whole nations that stood in his way. Eventually we developed a deadly sickness that could kill a man at a single touch. We spread it everywhere we could.
It was in a battle against a group that called themselves the Remnants of God that the curse that he controlled us with broke. We were finally free again. We then found out what all we had done ever since that fateful day..
Many years have passed and my war band is still looking for Zloy Chelovek. We have been chasing him all across the world. Our goal is to reclaim our lost souls so we can finally have our final death and face the judgment that we deserve. We have a battle cry for those who stand with us against the man: “Nikto Ny Vyshil!” which we shout for courage against the dammed.
(In all seriousness though, please consider writing your posts in Microsoft Word first before uploading them. You will be understood MUCH better.)
